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Array ( [sid] => 150789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I miss you [time] => 2009-06-17 06:34:36 [hometext] => After the break up I promised I would be there, if she needed, to be honest I can't fulfill that promise [bodytext] => I miss you
I miss your smile
the warmth of your laugh
the joy of your heart

I miss the moments
the gentle, quiet times
the curls in your hair
and the way you fell
into my arms
to cry into my heart
to cry into my soul

I miss you
and the way we were
unbroken
we danced, we sang
we were

I try to stand
but inside I break
I cannot catch you
if now you fall
my heart was broken
I hide it's pain

I miss your touch
but it will never feel
as it once was
you cast aside
I die inside

I miss you
but I'll move on
as you have done
with another heart
with another soul

I miss you
but my broken heart
is not for you to fix. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mase [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I miss you

Contributed by mase on Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 06:34:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I miss you
I miss your smile
the warmth of your laugh
the joy of your heart

I miss the moments
the gentle, quiet times
the curls in your hair
and the way you fell
into my arms
to cry into my heart
to cry into my soul

I miss you
and the way we were
unbroken
we danced, we sang
we were

I try to stand
but inside I break
I cannot catch you
if now you fall
my heart was broken
I hide it's pain

I miss your touch
but it will never feel
as it once was
you cast aside
I die inside

I miss you
but I'll move on
as you have done
with another heart
with another soul

I miss you
but my broken heart
is not for you to fix.

Copyright © mase ... [ 2009-06-17 06:34:36]
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Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyler on Wednesday, 17th June 2009 @ 07:51:39 PM AEST
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Makes me very sad, very well written!

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 08:48:26 PM AEST
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Very insightful, nicely done! Good work!

Re: I miss you (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 09:18:38 PM AEST
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A very emotional piece. I love the flow of your writing. Tears are about to pour from my heart for the pain you expressed in this poem. Beautiful write!

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