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Array ( [sid] => 150978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => if i give up what would i be. [time] => 2009-06-23 17:04:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => if i give up what would i be, i dont care what happens to me. i know my life is as crazy as it cant be, every since my daughter was taken from me, i wish god would take me away from the angel that was never sent to me,sometimes i blame it all on me.and i know life isn't for me cause i have a daughter that i cant even see. she's an angel they took from me. sometimes i wonder if she's thinking of me.if i give up i wonder where she would be.and if she would akways remember me.her love will always remain next to me, and i want her angel to watch over me, as i pray for her on my bended knee. i love you mariah your all around me, though that angel took you from me i know i cant give up cause im your angel that will never leave.and i know your probably pretty as can be. god sent me that beautiful little angel that i cant even see. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 23 [informant] => heather211 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
if i give up what would i be.

Contributed by heather211 on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 05:04:31 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



if i give up what would i be, i dont care what happens to me. i know my life is as crazy as it cant be, every since my daughter was taken from me, i wish god would take me away from the angel that was never sent to me,sometimes i blame it all on me.and i know life isn't for me cause i have a daughter that i cant even see. she's an angel they took from me. sometimes i wonder if she's thinking of me.if i give up i wonder where she would be.and if she would akways remember me.her love will always remain next to me, and i want her angel to watch over me, as i pray for her on my bended knee. i love you mariah your all around me, though that angel took you from me i know i cant give up cause im your angel that will never leave.and i know your probably pretty as can be. god sent me that beautiful little angel that i cant even see.




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Re: if i give up what would i be. (User Rating: 1 )
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