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Bring your heat and soul, make me complete,

I eagerly wait with a rose and a ring,
Rehearsing my speech as the birds around me sing,

The jewel glows under the moonlit sky,
A tear caresses your cheek as you let out a sigh,

In the meadows we make our sweet love,
Our only witnesses are the stars above,

A lovers clench as we watch the sun rise,
Naked and free, baring no disguise,

We rest our eyes safe in each others embrace,
A moment of bliss we could never replace,

I awake alone; our rendezvous is cold and grey,
I have nothing but memories of you and that your final day. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 434 [topic] => 2 [informant] => theurbanpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Lovers Rendezvous

Contributed by theurbanpoet on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 04:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Come my dear I'm waiting in Love Street,
Bring your heat and soul, make me complete,

I eagerly wait with a rose and a ring,
Rehearsing my speech as the birds around me sing,

The jewel glows under the moonlit sky,
A tear caresses your cheek as you let out a sigh,

In the meadows we make our sweet love,
Our only witnesses are the stars above,

A lovers clench as we watch the sun rise,
Naked and free, baring no disguise,

We rest our eyes safe in each others embrace,
A moment of bliss we could never replace,

I awake alone; our rendezvous is cold and grey,
I have nothing but memories of you and that your final day.

Copyright © theurbanpoet ... [ 2009-06-30 04:01:07]
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Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 04:53:42 AM AEST
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Crush. Ouch! i landed heavily from that ending! One of the most dramatic shifts in emotion in a single poem that I can remember. A momentous piece really.

-Phil

Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 08:14:12 AM AEST
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yes ouch... It is not a nice way to end what should have been a happy rendezvous

Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 08:46:57 PM AEST
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Great poem. To me the ending makes perfect sense. Passion this intense can't last forever. Maybe I'm a pessimist. I love this poem!

Heidi

Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 01:53:17 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful, an exquisite write,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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wow, intense, Thats my best discription of this poem.
It sounds sexual, although I'm not sure that was your intention
I loved it.
And I agree with heidi,
I think perfect moments like this last for eternity.
Lets face it, the world is not all roses and daisies, but memories of moments like this, really turn you alive.

Re: Lovers Rendezvous (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 10:24:34 PM AEST
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i dont know where to begin with this
this began so lovely, ended so sadly
relationships turn out that way too
maybe your next rendezvous will turnout different

take care

-K.Z.

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