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Array ( [sid] => 151191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Indication Of Death [time] => 2009-06-30 22:06:49 [hometext] => little different. hope you'll all enjoy it. [bodytext] => i walked past my chalked silhouet last night
i just had to see, if anyone would show up
not a soul in site so i strolled down stokes
but the welcome mat, didnt feal so welcoming

so i knocked on the door and no lights went on
i must not have struck the wood
and as i went to knock again,
my hand when threw the door

an indication of my well awaited afterlife

i let myself right in the house, walked in the kitchen
returned the cutlery you lent me last night
and i walked towards the basement were we parted ways
but tripped along the way

my body flipped down the stairs, from top to bottom
and i landed on the landing, without a scratch on me
we all wish we could avoid pain like that, but thats nothing
from what i received the night before

an inidication of my pure hatred

i walked threw the door into the living room
but you were nowhere to be found
i looked in you room, in the garage, but no luck for me
so i left and headed back to the chalked murder scene

i decided to go by shortline and see what was in store,
were we shared the first kiss remember? i sure do.. but crossing second
i see the bonny and clyde car at full speed headed my way
look past the dash and over the wheel, and the face is unmistakable

a clarification of my T.O.D.

because when the front end hit my body
i went flying down the street, past the store
fell right were kids were playing, with theyre chalks
landed right in the perfect trace of my body

so this tells me one thing, and one only
that my death was planned out, and you were the mastermind behind the plan
because nobody could have the power to lead me on then kill me
quite like you just did...

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An Indication Of Death

Contributed by earsofdeceit on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 10:06:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



i walked past my chalked silhouet last night
i just had to see, if anyone would show up
not a soul in site so i strolled down stokes
but the welcome mat, didnt feal so welcoming

so i knocked on the door and no lights went on
i must not have struck the wood
and as i went to knock again,
my hand when threw the door

an indication of my well awaited afterlife

i let myself right in the house, walked in the kitchen
returned the cutlery you lent me last night
and i walked towards the basement were we parted ways
but tripped along the way

my body flipped down the stairs, from top to bottom
and i landed on the landing, without a scratch on me
we all wish we could avoid pain like that, but thats nothing
from what i received the night before

an inidication of my pure hatred

i walked threw the door into the living room
but you were nowhere to be found
i looked in you room, in the garage, but no luck for me
so i left and headed back to the chalked murder scene

i decided to go by shortline and see what was in store,
were we shared the first kiss remember? i sure do.. but crossing second
i see the bonny and clyde car at full speed headed my way
look past the dash and over the wheel, and the face is unmistakable

a clarification of my T.O.D.

because when the front end hit my body
i went flying down the street, past the store
fell right were kids were playing, with theyre chalks
landed right in the perfect trace of my body

so this tells me one thing, and one only
that my death was planned out, and you were the mastermind behind the plan
because nobody could have the power to lead me on then kill me
quite like you just did...

an indication of death




Copyright © earsofdeceit ... [ 2009-06-30 22:06:49]
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Re: An Indication Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st July 2009 @ 05:32:30 PM AEST
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very unpredictable ending...i liked it.


Re: An Indication Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by bubkin on Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 08:49:32 AM AEST
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very very wonderful !


Re: An Indication Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 10:50:30 PM AEST
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very true




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