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What do you mean
Do I not matter
You make my heart shatter

With your words of hate that you tell
You tell me I can go to hell
That I’m replaceable and common to you
What do I have to do

To make you see
That I’m more then meets the eye when you look at me
I want to make it seen
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Disposable teen

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 11:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Disposable teen
What do you mean
Do I not matter
You make my heart shatter

With your words of hate that you tell
You tell me I can go to hell
That I’m replaceable and common to you
What do I have to do

To make you see
That I’m more then meets the eye when you look at me
I want to make it seen
That I’m not just a disposable teen

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-07-02 23:41:26]
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Re: Disposable teen (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 07:36:23 AM AEST
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Awesome emotion. If I may, I offer constructive criticism. Sometimes a poem doesn't need rhyme, and this one is one of those poems. This write would be much stronger if it said simply what you wanted to express. That IS the emotion that makes a poem however.

Re: Disposable teen (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 4th July 2009 @ 07:25:31 PM AEST
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Well , don't know who would say some thing like this to you or any other teen for that matter.
Who ever needs to look in the mirrer and say the same to their own image.
well written for sure.
All teens are importent to me.
Hang tuff and keep writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

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