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Array ( [sid] => 151312 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beyond the color blue [time] => 2009-07-06 16:26:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Gut me while the flesh is still fresh
Suffocate me while my breath is warm
Squeeze me until the blood would drip less
And feed me to the longing swarm

I've heard a lot of gossip trash
Each word just another meaningless lash
But only one thing said was true:
I am beaten, beyond the color blue

I lay here in a pool of flaking red
A drop that tastes of metal on my tongue
I do hope your lust is, truly, now fed
For there is no more to which I could possibly succumb

I am beaten, beyond the color blue
I am defeated, because of you
I wish you could see what you have done
But it's hidden behind the curtain, it was just for fun
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 75 [informant] => MissTeenSuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Beyond the color blue

Contributed by MissTeenSuicide on Monday, 6th July 2009 @ 04:26:34 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Gut me while the flesh is still fresh
Suffocate me while my breath is warm
Squeeze me until the blood would drip less
And feed me to the longing swarm

I've heard a lot of gossip trash
Each word just another meaningless lash
But only one thing said was true:
I am beaten, beyond the color blue

I lay here in a pool of flaking red
A drop that tastes of metal on my tongue
I do hope your lust is, truly, now fed
For there is no more to which I could possibly succumb

I am beaten, beyond the color blue
I am defeated, because of you
I wish you could see what you have done
But it's hidden behind the curtain, it was just for fun

Copyright © MissTeenSuicide ... [ 2009-07-06 16:26:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Beyond the color blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th July 2009 @ 06:32:03 AM AEST
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I especially love the flow and wording of the first stanza.

Re: Beyond the color blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:38:18 AM AEST
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Again, it's very well constructed. Good stuff.

-Phil

Re: Beyond the color blue (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Wednesday, 24th February 2010 @ 10:27:41 AM AEST
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Wow I like this one, it has an
awesome evil twist to it. I'm
a sucker for sickening love
poems :P
But well done!

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