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They foresee anxiety.
Locking on, the unease is drawn in,
Channeled through dazed eyes
And deposited in my brain.
It's left to stockpile in the minds rearmost cage.
Seal-proof, air-tight intrapment.
There's no release, no pressure valve.
Pressure builds up.
I start to ache,
Sweat, jolt and shake.
Fear shoots through my body.
Through my veins, around and around and around again.
When will I shatter?
Fragment into dust?
Disolve into the air?
I'm awaiting that day.
In the meantime I will pray. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve

Contributed by ed on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My pupils are radars.
They foresee anxiety.
Locking on, the unease is drawn in,
Channeled through dazed eyes
And deposited in my brain.
It's left to stockpile in the minds rearmost cage.
Seal-proof, air-tight intrapment.
There's no release, no pressure valve.
Pressure builds up.
I start to ache,
Sweat, jolt and shake.
Fear shoots through my body.
Through my veins, around and around and around again.
When will I shatter?
Fragment into dust?
Disolve into the air?
I'm awaiting that day.
In the meantime I will pray.

Copyright © ed ... [ 2003-03-29 04:45:00]
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Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 07:29:56 AM AEST
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such a good poem, im sorry it is this way for you.

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by tkaned on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 07:45:32 AM AEST
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Good poem, i like the way you convey your thoughts in this clever and passionate way, imagination and creativity is the best way to beat down your demons.

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:19:29 AM AEST
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love it - you convey the emotion well, combining physical and mental elements for a realistic expression of this feeling. powerful poem, keep them coming, Kate x

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:24:37 AM AEST
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an excellent poem, keep em coming

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 05:54:57 AM AEST
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You've got it wrong. Every hammer blow tempers the sword

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 05:58:49 AM AEST
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Excellent write of fear and foreboding but..............You've got it wrong.

Every hammer blow tempers the sword

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:09:38 AM AEST
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vivid and thought provoking poem... blessings...

Re: Awaiting the Day I Shatter, Fragment and Disolve (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 05:11:39 PM AEST
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HI, ed,
this is the first one off your poem i have read,its very good.
keeping praying to never stop.GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS.

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