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Array ( [sid] => 151424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you & your daddy [time] => 2009-07-11 05:11:24 [hometext] => i wrote this for emma when her daddy left 4yrs ago and now sadly it bears the same scenario for my second daughter libbia hang in there angels mummy loves you both. [bodytext] => Baby I know you miss the thought
Of having your own special dad
But I'm trying to pick up the peices
To give you's the life you never would've had.
I feel it when i see you slump
You're both craving for that special hug
wanting some one to be the one
to say they love you
but they never come.
You see your daddy used to hurt us
he'd just leave & never come home
He never told you he loved you
He just left you right alone.

I know a picture says a thousand words
But all yours tell are lies
They show the fakeness of affection
not the betrayal & the cries.
He showed you so many things
No child should ever see
So my darlings you now know why
It has to be just yous & me.
You'll both get the lives
Angels like yous deserve
A life thats straight, bright & true,
And this is the only way I can give it to yous. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 43 [informant] => becca_au85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

you & your daddy

Contributed by becca_au85 on Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 05:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Baby I know you miss the thought
Of having your own special dad
But I'm trying to pick up the peices
To give you's the life you never would've had.
I feel it when i see you slump
You're both craving for that special hug
wanting some one to be the one
to say they love you
but they never come.
You see your daddy used to hurt us
he'd just leave & never come home
He never told you he loved you
He just left you right alone.

I know a picture says a thousand words
But all yours tell are lies
They show the fakeness of affection
not the betrayal & the cries.
He showed you so many things
No child should ever see
So my darlings you now know why
It has to be just yous & me.
You'll both get the lives
Angels like yous deserve
A life thats straight, bright & true,
And this is the only way I can give it to yous.

Copyright © becca_au85 ... [ 2009-07-11 05:11:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you & your daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th July 2009 @ 05:16:27 PM AEST
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Very sad but it shows your strong luv, dedication and determination.
I raised my three children with out their dad and I'm proud of them and their own families now.
Great writing!
Huggs, blessings, prayer,
emy

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