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Array ( [sid] => 151455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => faire chance [time] => 2009-07-13 11:21:20 [hometext] => this one is about a girl i took to my local faire. thats pretty much it, lol. [bodytext] => i just wanted you to feel as good as you make me
and wonder if the same love i share will be recieved
i appear stoic but my eyes do glee
whenever you have the urge to speak to me

our first meeting, you showed up a little late
and we didnt decide to proclaim it a date
but you took me on a carnival ride at your own sake
and i won you that goldfish after the midway game

the fireworks were a good way to end the night
but no explosion in the sky can match your smiles sight
the biggest joy was the how we would play fight
now i feel like a fish you led by a hook and i want to bite

i cant wait to see you again
cause something about that day didnt feel like the end
i cant wait to see you again
and i wish we were more than just friends

now i have to wait for the week to die
and its end to come, before i can try
i will ask the question and wait for a reply
and Im hoping you'll make it the happiest day of my life

so many words i could use to express how you make me
you are the new star i hold at night in my dream
so i ask of you politely to make it a reality
cause this spark has become a gleem

i could go for hours about how i love you
but like my dreams, Ill end this too soon
i just hope you are this swooned
cause all of this is true. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 2 [informant] => owkenny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
faire chance

Contributed by owkenny on Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 11:21:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i just wanted you to feel as good as you make me
and wonder if the same love i share will be recieved
i appear stoic but my eyes do glee
whenever you have the urge to speak to me

our first meeting, you showed up a little late
and we didnt decide to proclaim it a date
but you took me on a carnival ride at your own sake
and i won you that goldfish after the midway game

the fireworks were a good way to end the night
but no explosion in the sky can match your smiles sight
the biggest joy was the how we would play fight
now i feel like a fish you led by a hook and i want to bite

i cant wait to see you again
cause something about that day didnt feel like the end
i cant wait to see you again
and i wish we were more than just friends

now i have to wait for the week to die
and its end to come, before i can try
i will ask the question and wait for a reply
and Im hoping you'll make it the happiest day of my life

so many words i could use to express how you make me
you are the new star i hold at night in my dream
so i ask of you politely to make it a reality
cause this spark has become a gleem

i could go for hours about how i love you
but like my dreams, Ill end this too soon
i just hope you are this swooned
cause all of this is true.




Copyright © owkenny ... [ 2009-07-13 11:21:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: faire chance (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Tuesday, 14th July 2009 @ 06:32:06 AM AEST
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nice poem.. inspiring write.... it really relates me....

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