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Array ( [sid] => 151655 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Girl (i had dibs) [time] => 2009-07-23 14:27:31 [hometext] => she was mine and you knew it [bodytext] => Angels heavenly hue takes hold
turning coldest heart of stone to gold
ravonous beauty mystical untold
deathly silence frozen ,cold

she enters nameless unspoken
glances cool our eyes meet
my eyes a blaze as i gaze at such a visual treat
at such a flawless bountyfull feast
all men turn to beast
sound broken action ceased

weightless senstation enseus
lustourous body yet mind of truths
motionless barren stopped time
my heart a thunder my soul to climb

you stand agate and wise
flirts useless fall to demise
even the best elaborate lies
eyes grew
hearts pound
still silent fractured sound
no rustle of paper
creaking of ground

ideas brew
like others do
wondering the things i like
she like to?
i see you
crimson fruitful sweetend lips
boys beside nudge (sex tips)
eyes of pearly sunken white
silvered skin luminious sight
i resist but why fight?
i loved to much and may mere fall to plight !

and then i gaze
at your transfixing perfect seducing haze
your deep mystique loses me in and endless maze
lost in a blissful daze

i lose you
my suprise leaps threws me
to which i see
you and Dee

Git! [comments] => 0 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 7 [informant] => fortunesdancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
My Girl (i had dibs)

Contributed by fortunesdancer on Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 02:27:31 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Angels heavenly hue takes hold
turning coldest heart of stone to gold
ravonous beauty mystical untold
deathly silence frozen ,cold

she enters nameless unspoken
glances cool our eyes meet
my eyes a blaze as i gaze at such a visual treat
at such a flawless bountyfull feast
all men turn to beast
sound broken action ceased

weightless senstation enseus
lustourous body yet mind of truths
motionless barren stopped time
my heart a thunder my soul to climb

you stand agate and wise
flirts useless fall to demise
even the best elaborate lies
eyes grew
hearts pound
still silent fractured sound
no rustle of paper
creaking of ground

ideas brew
like others do
wondering the things i like
she like to?
i see you
crimson fruitful sweetend lips
boys beside nudge (sex tips)
eyes of pearly sunken white
silvered skin luminious sight
i resist but why fight?
i loved to much and may mere fall to plight !

and then i gaze
at your transfixing perfect seducing haze
your deep mystique loses me in and endless maze
lost in a blissful daze

i lose you
my suprise leaps threws me
to which i see
you and Dee

Git!




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