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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Sailors Tragedy
[time] => 2009-07-24 18:19:23
[hometext] => Please if you like my poetry i love to receive feed back my email is hspratta@gmail.com feel free to email me tips, comments, constructive critiscim or anything i would love to hear from you! I worked very hard on this particular poem i hope you like it.
[bodytext] =>  A Sailors Tragedy Swimming in the waters of the Captain I slowly start to lose control of the waves Swimming, Sinking, Stuttering, Screaming I feel as if I知 dreaming Inferior to the Captain I知 influenced by his poison His kiss burning my lips even after he has left Intrepid, Intoxicated, Intrigued, Intimidated The coming actions were not anticipated The Captain痴 touch grants me feeble My Guardian Angel transformed as the Devil Partying, Pushing, Persuading, Pleading My words he is not heeding Retorting with force, but Captain renders me motionless The Devil strips me of my innocence left bare Threatening, Thrashing, Thrusting, Throbbing Seeming unaffected by the sounds of my sobbing Captain eases my body like a narcotic; a false sense of torpidity And Ecstasy breaks through the devils atrocity; a guilty pleasure Disfigured, Disgusted, Disturbed, Disdained I知 inside out and immediately ashamed Captain evokes me from this hell While the Devil leaves the scene of the crime Abused, Abominated, Abated, Abhorred My strident cry begging vindication from the lord A malicious slumber created by the Captain One at fourteen the Devil already addicted me to Corrupted, Contorted, Comminuted, Consolidated, Stuck in an everlasting stupor I was left completely sedated A calamity brought upon by alcohol and lust Malevolence achieved through wrongful trust Irreversible, Immutable, Irremediable, Irrefutable Forever tainted by his malice I am forever vulnerable [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 8 [informant] => CursedKiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
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