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who I am
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:01:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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who am I?
echo words
twisty words
almost sighs
stretched into
forever slipping
out of night
this alone
whispers
to me, no
matter that
half-place
between
forward
and back
a shatter
of weak
my world
waits hollow
a walk into
the howl
just through
the trees
strange place
this road
stillness
loosens
dawn
the quiet
who am I?
something
like peace.
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ming
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2009-07-28 06:01:14]
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Re: who I am
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:36:49 AM AEST
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Great poem. I enjoyed a great deal!
--Heidi |
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Re: who I am
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 03:07:07 PM AEST
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pretty abstract! but i understand the message (a bit haha) but it's a good one. even wen we cant discover ourselves, we can always find peace within (that's the theme i got from this, hope i'm not wrong haha). nicely done. take care
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