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Array ( [sid] => 151961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paint me in darkness [time] => 2009-08-03 06:50:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Colour my face with your hands so strong
I never blame you , its me thats always wrong

Shadow my soul with that dark heart you keep
You poisin with your lies so i can harldy speak

Darken my heart with the pain you caused me
I remember the day i was once so free

Push me around with your words of hate
This is what i deserve , this is my fate

Cover my eyes when i see a shimmer of light
I wont argue back , i know you are right

Pull the stings above my head , you control how i move
You will be my master always , i am yours to use
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 25 [informant] => bubkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Paint me in darkness

Contributed by bubkin on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 06:50:01 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Colour my face with your hands so strong
I never blame you , its me thats always wrong

Shadow my soul with that dark heart you keep
You poisin with your lies so i can harldy speak

Darken my heart with the pain you caused me
I remember the day i was once so free

Push me around with your words of hate
This is what i deserve , this is my fate

Cover my eyes when i see a shimmer of light
I wont argue back , i know you are right

Pull the stings above my head , you control how i move
You will be my master always , i am yours to use




Copyright © bubkin ... [ 2009-08-03 06:50:01]
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Re: Paint me in darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:56:09 AM AEST
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A passionate write, stay strong.

-phil


Re: Paint me in darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 10:49:18 PM AEST
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Wow this stings, ouch!
Incredible power within your verse.

Though....... do not let anyone do this to you, we all deserve love,

Peace to you

Michelle




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