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&
(I had only one)
though pearly white
iridescentish
sigh. . .
it would never float
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this small intrusive
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it is
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miss understanding

Contributed by elle on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 07:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

my sequin had a hole in it
&
(I had only one)
though pearly white
iridescentish
sigh. . .
it would never float
or fly
this small intrusive
inconsistency
it is
such a small thing
but. . .
I am at a loss

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-08-03 19:43:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: miss understanding (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:03:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful Elle, I love your style of writing so much.

hugs
Michelle

Re: miss understanding (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:49:18 PM AEST
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Dear Miss Understanding,

The puzzled procured a mind
The mind procured a puzzle
Intertwined they mingled yet,
Things were left unsaid
They knew,
They watched,
They learned
Together they were lost
Found they were together
Souls became their one
Fascination replaced the loss

Re: miss understanding (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 08:56:49 PM AEST
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i like this poem. u have express urself very well in this.

Re: miss understanding (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:13:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Your writing always takes me on a poetic journey and leaves me thinking deeply.

--Heidi

Re: miss understanding (User Rating: 1 )
by ChenoaShiningwater on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 06:34:21 AM AEST
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Abstract at its finest!
I love how this piece can be perceived in so many different ways...according to the individual that is *smiles*
A wonderfully thought provoking read
Thank you

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