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your lips close a circle

Contributed by orphani on Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 07:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

(your lips close )-- a circle
of leaf to earth descending
then rising,
as your eyes that distance
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,embraced,
when the milkweed shed it 's seed
to fly,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
twirling toward the lightless shadow,
above the comming ordained snow

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i
wait the unblossomed flower of spring.

Copyright © orphani ... [ 2009-08-16 19:48:58]
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Re: your lips close a circle (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 07:51:01 PM AEST
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I loved this, so soft and beautifulo.

when the milkweed shed it's seed to fly, lovely!

Michelle

Re: your lips close a circle (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 08:13:50 PM AEST
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Simply delicate use of language. I get a light and airy feeling like I am on a dream cloud as I read this piece. Excellent imagery!

--Heidi

Re: your lips close a circle (User Rating: 1 )
by orphani on Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 04:26:10 AM AEST
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sorry--this one is crap --needs a total rewrite.
already starting to really stink blather.
o

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