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Array ( [sid] => 152380 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Violate My Mind [time] => 2009-08-19 14:57:42 [hometext] => Ever get used by someone you thought had your best interest had heart? only to find they themselves never had one, in the first place. [bodytext] =>


I won't let you get to me with all the things you say
your the fool who bent the rule and threw her life
away, using every one you meet to give you what
you lack, now your on a dead end street and there's
no turning back . . .

I was but a passing fad amusement at it's best
a freak in you menagerie along with all the rest,
you who thinks she rules the scene like one who
never begs, treating people mean because of what's
between your legs . . .

Taking something beautiful and ripping it apart
all the while pretending you were speaking from
your heart, making like a friend in deed so sad
came your surprise, to see you cut and then not
bleed inside your vain of lies . . .

Oh i saw you coming what else could i expect?
why settle for my jugular? when you could have
my neck, slowly you were making sense that
was to plain to see, leaving me with no defense
is where you wanted me . . .

Here's to you and all you got and what i tried to
save a little could have been a lot now dying
in a grave, i'll not let you get to me you violate
my mind were you all i had to see much better,
i'd be blind . . .



no1special








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You Violate My Mind

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 02:57:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry






I won't let you get to me with all the things you say
your the fool who bent the rule and threw her life
away, using every one you meet to give you what
you lack, now your on a dead end street and there's
no turning back . . .

I was but a passing fad amusement at it's best
a freak in you menagerie along with all the rest,
you who thinks she rules the scene like one who
never begs, treating people mean because of what's
between your legs . . .

Taking something beautiful and ripping it apart
all the while pretending you were speaking from
your heart, making like a friend in deed so sad
came your surprise, to see you cut and then not
bleed inside your vain of lies . . .

Oh i saw you coming what else could i expect?
why settle for my jugular? when you could have
my neck, slowly you were making sense that
was to plain to see, leaving me with no defense
is where you wanted me . . .

Here's to you and all you got and what i tried to
save a little could have been a lot now dying
in a grave, i'll not let you get to me you violate
my mind were you all i had to see much better,
i'd be blind . . .



no1special












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Re: You Violate My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 03:10:05 PM AEST
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The poem is great I love the emotion but why is there two of the same poems on the home page by two different people just thought you should know
Great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly


Re: You Violate My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 05:18:17 AM AEST
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Sounds so faintly familiar!!!! This is an exceptional write!!! It's a # 10 in all areas! Keep up the good work!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana


Re: You Violate My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 09:20:36 PM AEST
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My friend,
this is an incredible vent darkly poem.
I know what this is about and I am so so sorry it happened. WRONG!! She should not have done this.

Love you tons my friend
super huge hugs
Michelle


Re: You Violate My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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im sorry you went through this, i did last year, tried to help a longtime friend who ended up just using me, and acting very badly, these people are parasites.... excellent write:)

hugs n' love nessa




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