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The debris from the carnal wreckage
lies scattered upon floor and sheets
Misery moans,a deep guttural sound
Her mistress,the keeper...

depletes

Utter madness is,and will evermore
Be the tune to which she will dance
No longer a choice,more now the demise
And this be her final...

romance

Lifeless in thought,abandoned emotion
Strung up on the threads of her smile
Dirty washing is now,where fantasies played
And all can see her...

denial [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ChenoaShiningwater [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Her Suffering Was Romantic (to her)

Contributed by ChenoaShiningwater on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 01:04:15 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The debris from the carnal wreckage
lies scattered upon floor and sheets
Misery moans,a deep guttural sound
Her mistress,the keeper...

depletes

Utter madness is,and will evermore
Be the tune to which she will dance
No longer a choice,more now the demise
And this be her final...

romance

Lifeless in thought,abandoned emotion
Strung up on the threads of her smile
Dirty washing is now,where fantasies played
And all can see her...

denial

Copyright © ChenoaShiningwater ... [ 2009-08-22 01:04:15]
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Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic (to her) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 04:16:53 AM AEST
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I assume by bdsm you mean Buddhism right? Thankfully, I've got an interest in it so I can fully understand the sentiment behind this. I think Buddha was probably right, all life is suffering. All we can really do is dilute it and find ourselves amongst this chaos. However, accepting suffering is probably a good idea. it's inevitable. To pretend otherwise would be naive. But to embrace it is a whole other concept. A dangerous concept. After all i've read, I believe Buddhism can save lives. It's philosophy on a whole different level to other faiths or doctrines. But it can also destroy lives too, like any faith. Maybe if everybody was a better person, there wouldn't be suffering at all. Alas; this is planet earth, not nirvana.

As for the poem? Well it's one of the best i've read in a while. It would be a crime if it doesn't receive more acclaim. If it doesn't, don't panic. It just means that people on this site don't know what they're talking about.

-Phil

Re: Her Suffering Was Romantic (to her) (User Rating: 1 )
by ChenoaShiningwater on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 04:53:46 AM AEST
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Hi Phil...thank you for taking the time and leaving your voice.I have sent you a private message regarding this piece *smiles*

I am humbled by your compliments...
Blessings

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