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Array ( [sid] => 152464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LIfe Or Death [time] => 2009-08-22 09:33:11 [hometext] => A while back..I was having a really hard time with life. So after a truly hard day. I wrote this. [bodytext] => My life is rough.

I try and seem tough

I act happy through the day

But at night I feel as if I am wasting away

My friends try and help

They think that they know me

Who I am. What I do

But they don't

They Never did.

I sit alone in the pouring rain.

Its so cold but no one pulls me away.

The tears in my eyes start to fall.

I feel as if its time to make the call.

But how do you decide on something so difficult

Life and death. The choice...is it an easy one?

Is a Life wasted even life.

And if death is achieved...

Well aren't I really only pleasing me.

I think some more on the subject.

If I would do it....how.

Jump,Shoot,Cut...so many choices to choose from.

But I don't choose any

I'm too afraid to leave this so called life.

I guess I can just wait

Until I can finally hold that knife.
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LIfe Or Death

Contributed by Roxximajor on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 09:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My life is rough.

I try and seem tough

I act happy through the day

But at night I feel as if I am wasting away

My friends try and help

They think that they know me

Who I am. What I do

But they don't

They Never did.

I sit alone in the pouring rain.

Its so cold but no one pulls me away.

The tears in my eyes start to fall.

I feel as if its time to make the call.

But how do you decide on something so difficult

Life and death. The choice...is it an easy one?

Is a Life wasted even life.

And if death is achieved...

Well aren't I really only pleasing me.

I think some more on the subject.

If I would do it....how.

Jump,Shoot,Cut...so many choices to choose from.

But I don't choose any

I'm too afraid to leave this so called life.

I guess I can just wait

Until I can finally hold that knife.

Copyright © Roxximajor ... [ 2009-08-22 09:33:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LIfe Or Death (User Rating: 1 )
by rossdean on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 10:15:57 AM AEST
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i can feel your emotions with every line. you expressed emotion highly and it really touched a nerve keep writing traceyx

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