Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	09-June 17:38:28 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 152565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Longsleeves [time] => 2009-08-25 10:50:23 [hometext] => Under the Longsleeves are marks from previous attempted suicides [bodytext] => Another day
Here I go
Guess who's gonna win???
I already ***** know

Every step I take
Every breath I breathe
It's gotten so bad
I must always wear sleeves

The pain in my neck
The fire in my spine
Every ***** day
I dream of new ways to die

Summers almost here
Soon they all will see
How many times I've tried to leave
Unsuccessfully

Take another pill for pain
Sharpness gone
Unbalanced brain

Pull the trigger
Goodbye pain
Sorry about
The red blood stain

Alone in my coffin
Pain free finally
Sweet summer breeze
No need for longsleeves [comments] => 6 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => sugarshane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Longsleeves

Contributed by sugarshane on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:50:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Another day
Here I go
Guess who's gonna win???
I already ***** know

Every step I take
Every breath I breathe
It's gotten so bad
I must always wear sleeves

The pain in my neck
The fire in my spine
Every ***** day
I dream of new ways to die

Summers almost here
Soon they all will see
How many times I've tried to leave
Unsuccessfully

Take another pill for pain
Sharpness gone
Unbalanced brain

Pull the trigger
Goodbye pain
Sorry about
The red blood stain

Alone in my coffin
Pain free finally
Sweet summer breeze
No need for longsleeves

Copyright © sugarshane ... [ 2009-08-25 10:50:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by shaza on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 01:08:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Such daily pain, a feeling of isolation in the words, very emotional shaza from paisley in scotland

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:53:46 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I can really feel the pain and emotion in this poem. I often thought like this myself and at times still do. But I do hope that you have someone to turn to and know that someone out there does care about you

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 04:37:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

The "Sweet Summer Breeze" was...is... ...
... always will be, Sweet.

Leave the "pain" to the Crazy world were in.

...Let it all go ... .... ....

....and ...

wear a tank top.

Peace&Love.
Dirk.

p.s ...
powerful poem !

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:17:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

A poem very well written though so darn sad.

Peace to you

Michelle

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:31:57 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

it felt like i had some pain up my sleeves as i
read this (literally!) thats how effective this was...its a very painful yet deep poem here,
hope it remedied some of your agony...
dont let it get to u
take care

-K.Z.

Re: Longsleeves (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 11:48:39 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yes I felt all that pain as I read........use to feel like that sometime ago....beautiful expression of feelings.

LadyRose

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com