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Array ( [sid] => 15268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A beautiful mind [time] => 2003-03-30 21:45:00 [hometext] => Something about my recent confusions in life. Still don't understand why certain things have happened. [bodytext] => Is there any place in this world
Where my failures don't really matter
Is there any place inside your heart
Where my soul can find comfort and retreat
Is there any place inside my mind
Where I can accept that I've lost this time

Why did time choose me to find this
Now that I've become blind in seeing you
Why did time choose me to let go
Now that I've found a place to grow
Why did time choose me to miss you
Now that your voice left me to face mine

Can you forgive me for thinking
That you never wanted more than this
Can you forgive me for pretending
That your words weren't really for me
Can you forgive me for expecting
That you would leave me here alone

Will you remember what made every sky blue
I don't want to lose what we have
Will you remember how you made me fine again
I don't want to forget your smile
Will you remember my heart in you beautiful mind
I don't want to become what I used to fear [comments] => 9 [counter] => 1085 [topic] => 48 [informant] => psyonara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
A beautiful mind

Contributed by psyonara on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Is there any place in this world
Where my failures don't really matter
Is there any place inside your heart
Where my soul can find comfort and retreat
Is there any place inside my mind
Where I can accept that I've lost this time

Why did time choose me to find this
Now that I've become blind in seeing you
Why did time choose me to let go
Now that I've found a place to grow
Why did time choose me to miss you
Now that your voice left me to face mine

Can you forgive me for thinking
That you never wanted more than this
Can you forgive me for pretending
That your words weren't really for me
Can you forgive me for expecting
That you would leave me here alone

Will you remember what made every sky blue
I don't want to lose what we have
Will you remember how you made me fine again
I don't want to forget your smile
Will you remember my heart in you beautiful mind
I don't want to become what I used to fear




Copyright © psyonara ... [ 2003-03-30 21:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:39:00 PM AEST
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I love this!! Excellent!

"Is there any place inside my mind
Where I can accept that I've lost this time"

:) Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:31:58 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very...honest. :)


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ivoryA on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:20:10 PM AEST
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i liked your poem it made me think
it seems like you put a lot of thought into it and i think in time your confusion will leave you and your thoughts will be clear
keep writing your very good at it


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:17:24 AM AEST
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I love your poem...I really liked the last line "I don't want to become what I used to fear"..very good write


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by OhSaige on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:35:49 PM AEST
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I love it.

OhSaige
-S-S-


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindRomantic on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:39:07 AM AEST
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you're my hero..


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:10:24 AM AEST
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wow. that is.....it really made me think. i like it alot.


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:39:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful words!A poem rich with emotion.Well done.


Re: A beautiful mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Val-Hundra on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 11:21:29 PM AEST
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I love. Its very well written. Tres bien! Write more!




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