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Array ( [sid] => 152832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => RELAPSE [time] => 2009-09-02 23:46:17 [hometext] => Idle hands... you know what I mean, just ask god, he started it all... I wouldn't make the same mistake... [bodytext] => Lost in the fog
of a subconscious war
A lifemare of struggle and strife
The four horsemen of apocalypse
Knock on my minds door
My doom looms
and I never want to look
For what I have to live for
My list now stops at one
The stars in my sky are black
Hatred eternally blotting out the sun
Each and every sensation is lost
Writings on ancient walls
Every meaning is gone
God deserves his hell he rot
For the worst of what he's done
While every one of us
Continues on our own
You know there is something very wrong
When the only thing to do
Is to sit and stare
Blankly at the empty view
Whether a god of light
or a creature of fight or flight
Nothing can go right
When one tries to fulfill ones needs

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Onslaught [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested. Moderator_18 September 3, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

RELAPSE

Contributed by Onslaught on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 11:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Lost in the fog
of a subconscious war
A lifemare of struggle and strife
The four horsemen of apocalypse
Knock on my minds door
My doom looms
and I never want to look
For what I have to live for
My list now stops at one
The stars in my sky are black
Hatred eternally blotting out the sun
Each and every sensation is lost
Writings on ancient walls
Every meaning is gone
God deserves his hell he rot
For the worst of what he's done
While every one of us
Continues on our own
You know there is something very wrong
When the only thing to do
Is to sit and stare
Blankly at the empty view
Whether a god of light
or a creature of fight or flight
Nothing can go right
When one tries to fulfill ones needs

Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2009-09-02 23:46:17]
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Re: RELAPSE (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 01:44:44 AM AEST
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Hi,

Keep looking, my friend. There is much beauty
and stimulus out there, and I hope you find it.

A well crafted poem, by a voice in the dark.

Tommy

Re: RELAPSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Mrmatt on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 03:50:14 AM AEST
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........WOW! Nothing can describe your peice of art. nice my friend

Re: RELAPSE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 12:43:39 PM AEST
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A very good poem, well crafted.

-Phil

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