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Array ( [sid] => 152856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Undoubted Troubles Of Man [time] => 2009-09-03 21:37:54 [hometext] => Look around, ones vision may only go so far, but far enough to see what is truely happening. [bodytext] => A fall of tree,
No cash for the,
A black mans rise,
World’s empathy,
Take down the wall, break the stone,
Take those who built it, and break the bone,
One child may starve,
Another, gorge food,
Rich mans broke,
Now forced to loot,
Evil in the north,
Evil in the south,
Stick and stones will break thy bones,
Murder from the mouth,
Bullet ends it all,
Seems like logic,
Yet mans blind to fall,
Endings tragic,
Trick revealed,
“That’s not magic…”
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The Undoubted Troubles Of Man

Contributed by Xjordanary on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 09:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

A fall of tree,
No cash for the,
A black mans rise,
World’s empathy,
Take down the wall, break the stone,
Take those who built it, and break the bone,
One child may starve,
Another, gorge food,
Rich mans broke,
Now forced to loot,
Evil in the north,
Evil in the south,
Stick and stones will break thy bones,
Murder from the mouth,
Bullet ends it all,
Seems like logic,
Yet mans blind to fall,
Endings tragic,
Trick revealed,
“That’s not magic…”

Copyright Â© Xjordanary ... [ 2009-09-03 21:37:54]
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Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 10:39:41 PM AEST
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You created a well written and very honest write here.
Life is a bit spooky these days, tis true.

Nice work

Bless you

Michelle

Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Antzus on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 06:14:29 AM AEST
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This is great! I liked it the first time I read it, and really liked it the second time. For some reason I love "Murder from the mouth". Strange ending though.

As the Flobots say "there's a war for your mind. If you're thinking, then you're winning". Keep that questioning mind alive.

Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 01:03:26 PM AEST
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Good, honest writing.

-Phil

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