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Though separate lives they both did lead
For a single reason their hearts did bleed
Because they came from different places
They had never met or seen each others faces

Time went on and their friendship did grow
More about each other they wanted to know
Though their separate lives kept them away
A special time they spent together every day

One day in his heart he felt a deep burn
To express his feeling he did yearn
She wondered if what he said could be real
He said if he was blind the same way he would feel

His desire was for the woman within the exterior shell
He had hoped she understood this before when he did tell
If through this life they never do get to physically touch
He wanted her to understand he loved he so much

Deadwriter
09/06/2009

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Separate Lives

Contributed by deadwriter on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 06:22:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Separate Lives

Though separate lives they both did lead
For a single reason their hearts did bleed
Because they came from different places
They had never met or seen each others faces

Time went on and their friendship did grow
More about each other they wanted to know
Though their separate lives kept them away
A special time they spent together every day

One day in his heart he felt a deep burn
To express his feeling he did yearn
She wondered if what he said could be real
He said if he was blind the same way he would feel

His desire was for the woman within the exterior shell
He had hoped she understood this before when he did tell
If through this life they never do get to physically touch
He wanted her to understand he loved he so much

Deadwriter
09/06/2009

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Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 07:32:12 PM AEST
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This is a very lovcely poem . I wish i could rhyme as good as you!

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 07:33:31 PM AEST
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Great write. I can relate.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 08:23:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. You capture the essence of a love of distant soul mates that may have never met physically but are bonded together spirtually.

Heidi

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 08:57:10 PM AEST
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so very sweet and beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 09:39:05 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, my friend. There is much to be said for the heart's eyes.
For even when we cannot see in the physical sense, the heart always knows.
It sees with a perfection that even 20/20 does not possess. Your expression
is a gift and your heart is an ocean, dear poet. Very deep.

Beautiful ~

~ Breezy

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 09:08:14 AM AEST
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Soul mates true love but sometimes never meet. Great write thank you

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 08:12:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful and tender write my friend.
Loved it!

Happy Labor Day

Michelle

Re: Separate Lives (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 07:11:03 PM AEST
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My dear friend,
This is truly beautiful...as is your heart!!
Hugs hugs from across the oceans...
Jenni

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