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Array ( [sid] => 153100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Hummingbird's Visit [time] => 2009-09-11 19:22:08 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for my Aunt. Today is her birthday. [bodytext] => On a sun-filled September day,
whistling wind blowing cares astray,
a momentous event occurred,
a visit from a hummingbird.
A snapshot of time standing still,
as you gaze leaning on the window sill.
The flickering fairy with the mystical hum,
more magical than all dreams to come,
iridescent flutters in mid-air,
from the window, you stop and stare;
winged magic in plain sight,
fairy dust sparkling in the light,
rapidly disappearing in a flash of time.
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The Hummingbird's Visit

Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 07:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

On a sun-filled September day,
whistling wind blowing cares astray,
a momentous event occurred,
a visit from a hummingbird.
A snapshot of time standing still,
as you gaze leaning on the window sill.
The flickering fairy with the mystical hum,
more magical than all dreams to come,
iridescent flutters in mid-air,
from the window, you stop and stare;
winged magic in plain sight,
fairy dust sparkling in the light,
rapidly disappearing in a flash of time.
The hummingbird's presence is sublime.

Copyright © lesoleilnoire ... [ 2009-09-11 19:22:08]
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Re: The Hummingbird's Visit (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 07:53:41 PM AEST
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One of the best types of birthday presents. Very lovely and enjoyable.

Re: The Hummingbird's Visit (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 08:41:27 PM AEST
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Sweetest presents are from the heart.
Lovely. elle :)

Re: The Hummingbird's Visit (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 12:23:08 AM AEST
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i just love humming birds, this poem is beautiful...

hugs n' love nessa

Re: The Hummingbird's Visit (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 03:05:46 PM AEST
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We don't have hummingbirds where I live, but if
this is the kind of poetry they inspire, then .......

How much for a dozen??

Lucky aunt. Velvet verse!

Tommy

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