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Bondage of the Soul
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:13:31 PM in AEST
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Chains encase my heart;
restricting love's true art,
shackles constrict the beating;
passion walks away retreating.
Ropes confine my mind;
knotting ideas like a ball of twine,
A black hole entraps my soul,
life is an abyss out of control.
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2009-09-15 19:13:31]
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Re: Bondage of the Soul
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:29:08 PM AEST
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| And therein lies the art - the craft of a 'true' poet....to take an idea and compose it in such a way that it makes sense and yet still manages to rhyme. Well done! |
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Re: Bondage of the Soul
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:20:56 PM AEST
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| Very good!..I have one which I believe could be of similar subject matter, or at least might conjure up the same sort of images. It's called THIS NOOSE KEEPS ME HANGING AROUND WITH YOU. Look out for it if I post it tomorrow. In the meantime I'll go and check out some more of your stuff. |
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