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Array ( [sid] => 153277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => * The Tree of my Consciousness * [time] => 2009-09-15 19:17:46 [hometext] => I dreamed the dream of a tree and became a heavenly tree. This is one of my best poems.I wish that all of you read this.. [bodytext] => ~*~
It was in a dream I became a seed of light.
A note of eternal sound stirred within me to sprout
and see the sun, moon,stars and blue skies
I became a plant and drunk the wonder of sun rays
tasted the nectar of moon beems, blending
the melody of breezes and stars within me
I dreamed the dream of a tree to build
an empire of love in my arms, my branches,
and then I became tree.

~*~
I stretched my branches of light into endless
spaces and created the roads of white milky ways
I created a paradise in the middle of my branches
with ever green cities of countless leaves,
with multi colored countries of blazing flowers
and with heavenly islands of my flaming fruits
With divine love I ruled the earth and heavens
I sheltered the Sun, Moon and stars of light
I sheltered the hosts of angels among the stars
and allowed them to celebrate spring festivals
with psalms and songs and sprightly dances.
Thus I realized my dream of becoming a tree
in the heights of heavens.
~*~
Again in the consciousness of my dream
I became the tree of life upon this earth.
Autumn anointed yellow upon my leaves
Air removed my garments and the mist
sprinkled holy dew over my nakedness
And I the tree, like a king after coronation
conferred my imperial gifts of cool shades
to the scorched earth, and with divine love
I shared my fruits of life with all peoples
of all races even from the beginning of creation.
I dropped my ripened fruits of knowledge
And scattered seeds of light in all directions
I have been enlightening the minds of devotees
through out past centuries, and in all visions
of sages I shine as the tree of eternal light!
~*~^~*~
-venkat

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* The Tree of my Consciousness *

Contributed by venkat on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:17:46 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



~*~
It was in a dream I became a seed of light.
A note of eternal sound stirred within me to sprout
and see the sun, moon,stars and blue skies
I became a plant and drunk the wonder of sun rays
tasted the nectar of moon beems, blending
the melody of breezes and stars within me
I dreamed the dream of a tree to build
an empire of love in my arms, my branches,
and then I became tree.

~*~
I stretched my branches of light into endless
spaces and created the roads of white milky ways
I created a paradise in the middle of my branches
with ever green cities of countless leaves,
with multi colored countries of blazing flowers
and with heavenly islands of my flaming fruits
With divine love I ruled the earth and heavens
I sheltered the Sun, Moon and stars of light
I sheltered the hosts of angels among the stars
and allowed them to celebrate spring festivals
with psalms and songs and sprightly dances.
Thus I realized my dream of becoming a tree
in the heights of heavens.
~*~
Again in the consciousness of my dream
I became the tree of life upon this earth.
Autumn anointed yellow upon my leaves
Air removed my garments and the mist
sprinkled holy dew over my nakedness
And I the tree, like a king after coronation
conferred my imperial gifts of cool shades
to the scorched earth, and with divine love
I shared my fruits of life with all peoples
of all races even from the beginning of creation.
I dropped my ripened fruits of knowledge
And scattered seeds of light in all directions
I have been enlightening the minds of devotees
through out past centuries, and in all visions
of sages I shine as the tree of eternal light!
~*~^~*~
-venkat





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Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 08:08:35 PM AEST
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i like it venkat, i like the feeling it gives of freedom and wonder


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 09:58:52 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Venkat,
it has brought my soul a brief moment of peace tonight. Thank you for sharing this my dear friend.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:01:32 PM AEST
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Heavenly write.
It reveals and magnafies the love of God for all.
Awesome.
Huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 10:17:08 AM AEST
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what a great poem! i love it, 'tis beautiful...

hugs n' love nessa


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 08:28:17 PM AEST
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What a beautiful dream & a very glorious consciousness.
I loved the entire poem. It truly inspires a precious feeling & moment of bliss.
smiles~elle :)


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 02:20:26 AM AEST
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loved this poem
Take care


Re: * The Tree of my Consciousness * (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th October 2013 @ 10:30:43 PM AEST
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Vivid colors and inspired imagination. What a wonderful conscience and dream.




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