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Another Bloodstain
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Paint the walls red In the bedroom where you cut your wrists When the agony went to your head And you could no longer bare to just clench your fists Blood dripping like an August shower You showed us all the way to lose When your wrists split, you lost your power The wrong decision was your's to choose And you chose it with your blade of steel By nearly taking your own life You left us all with no feelings to feel Except hatred for your used knife What possesed you to do such a thing? Could it have been worth all the pain? Who knows what the next 18 years will bring? Hopefully not another bloodstain A blood stain your psychiatrist is forced to clean Before the wounds start to spread Tell them to explain what they mean So your self esteem can be fed
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2003-03-31 20:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Another Bloodstain
(User Rating: 1 ) by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 03:15:46 PM AEST (User
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i liked it, usially i come across the view of the cutter... its good to see the reverse side, i think it can be true at times, its very direct and i liked it... keep it up ~Apryl |
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Re: Another Bloodstain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 03:59:52 AM AEST (User
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So much pain so much hurt, nicely written, the way you blend the words into sadness I liked very much. |
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