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In the bedroom where you cut your wrists
When the agony went to your head
And you could no longer bare to just clench your fists
Blood dripping like an August shower
You showed us all the way to lose
When your wrists split, you lost your power
The wrong decision was your's to choose
And you chose it with your blade of steel
By nearly taking your own life
You left us all with no feelings to feel
Except hatred for your used knife
What possesed you to do such a thing?
Could it have been worth all the pain?
Who knows what the next 18 years will bring?
Hopefully not another bloodstain
A blood stain your psychiatrist is forced to clean
Before the wounds start to spread
Tell them to explain what they mean
So your self esteem can be fed [comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ChristopherFriedrich [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Another Bloodstain

Contributed by ChristopherFriedrich on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Paint the walls red
In the bedroom where you cut your wrists
When the agony went to your head
And you could no longer bare to just clench your fists
Blood dripping like an August shower
You showed us all the way to lose
When your wrists split, you lost your power
The wrong decision was your's to choose
And you chose it with your blade of steel
By nearly taking your own life
You left us all with no feelings to feel
Except hatred for your used knife
What possesed you to do such a thing?
Could it have been worth all the pain?
Who knows what the next 18 years will bring?
Hopefully not another bloodstain
A blood stain your psychiatrist is forced to clean
Before the wounds start to spread
Tell them to explain what they mean
So your self esteem can be fed

Copyright © ChristopherFriedrich ... [ 2003-03-31 20:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Another Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 03:15:46 PM AEST
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i liked it, usially i come across the view of the cutter... its good to see the reverse side, i think it can be true at times, its very direct and i liked it... keep it up ~Apryl

Re: Another Bloodstain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 03:59:52 AM AEST
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So much pain so much hurt, nicely written, the way you blend the words into sadness I liked very much.

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