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a wild place
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 09:11:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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and the Oak tree
smiles
sunlight flashes
through
vaulting shadows
through
the woods
wading creeks
collecting spiders
touching leaves
reveling in the Glory
capture
the light
and
hold
soak it up
from the inside
touching
beyond
reach
feel
it
a rush
of oak leaves
in the wind.
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ming
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2009-09-23 09:11:39]
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Re: a wild place
(User Rating: 1 )
by anomalei on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 12:23:11 PM AEST
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this is fantastic.
(i decided that since you read so many of mine - i would glance around your page a bit...)
so many tiny images that create, as a whole, a wonderful scene.
short phrases break the train of thought, much as one would look at a picture - one glance, until another part catches your eye, etc.
anyways, 'twas lovely.
*JAE |
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