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So

nice we're still together

in the sunset of our years,

so many moments weathered

'midst the laughter and the

tears.

Love's

been more than good to me

it's been a dream come true,

you and i fit perfectly

like we were meant to

do.

So

nice that after all this time

like poetry our hearts still

rhyme,

in every verse that we construe

again i fall in love with

you.

So

young we were

but took that chance

on what we never knew,

yet so easy was the dance

we never missed a

cue.

So

nice we're still together

such closeness you can bring,

with you i feel like summer does

when e'er it see's

the

spring.

Ben

myheartsvoicebjpsno1special

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So Nice We're Still Together . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 09:22:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

So

nice we're still together

in the sunset of our years,

so many moments weathered

'midst the laughter and the

tears.

Love's

been more than good to me

it's been a dream come true,

you and i fit perfectly

like we were meant to

do.

So

nice that after all this time

like poetry our hearts still

rhyme,

in every verse that we construe

again i fall in love with

you.

So

young we were

but took that chance

on what we never knew,

yet so easy was the dance

we never missed a

cue.

So

nice we're still together

such closeness you can bring,

with you i feel like summer does

when e'er it see's

the

spring.

Ben

myheartsvoicebjpsno1special

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2009-09-28 09:22:16]
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Re: So Nice We're Still Together . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 10:14:03 AM AEST
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this poem is beautiful...
sweet rhymes and they seem so spontaneous, so fluid, so straight from the heart !
urs is the kind of love people dream about
...people think about when they say 'grow old with me, the best is yet to be'
bless u both and take care !

Re: So Nice We're Still Together . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 09:45:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful words Ben. You've got so much to be proud of in lasting so long
in the age of disposable marriages. I know it wasn't always easy, or
filled with sunshine and roses, but you did it. And you are still very
much in love. ^_^ Gives me hope and restores my faith in love,
every time I experience one of your writes. Beautifully done, my friend.

~ Breezy
(hope you are well)

Re: So Nice We're Still Together . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 01:27:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful as always, my friend.
Say hey for me.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
Tell Joan, I said I think she got the last good man on this planet.

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