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You give. . .

ambitious smiles
& freely share. . .

with all
ideas of hope. . .

So worthy of praise
& hand-holding afternoons.

Your hand, my hand
our frisbee, spinning delight.

You won that Special Saturday.
(you did your very best).

Not long after the ride out,
smiling, you said
"Let's go back & get my brothers. . .
share the day with them. . ." [comments] => 5 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 23 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

page of innocence. . .

Contributed by elle on Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 06:47:50 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

You give. . .

ambitious smiles
& freely share. . .

with all
ideas of hope. . .

So worthy of praise
& hand-holding afternoons.

Your hand, my hand
our frisbee, spinning delight.

You won that Special Saturday.
(you did your very best).

Not long after the ride out,
smiling, you said
"Let's go back & get my brothers. . .
share the day with them. . ."

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-10-04 18:47:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: page of innocence. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 08:16:56 PM AEST
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remembrances such as this are always a fine line between heartwarming and heartbreaking, at least for me. Maybe they draw from the same emotional reservoir.

Well captured.

Spike

Re: page of innocence. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 10:38:44 PM AEST
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Nice poem elle, Made me smile,
I wish my brothers when like Tate's, mine I tried to avoid being the youngest I got bullied, but sounds like Tate has a wonderful time with you
great poem
hope you keep having times like these
And hope to read more soon
-Kelly

Re: page of innocence. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 10:51:18 AM AEST
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A lovely little write, very sweet :)

-Phil

Re: page of innocence. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 01:13:37 PM AEST
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Hi Elle,

Lovely little poem, extolling the virtues of family
unity and love. Well done!

Tommy

Re: page of innocence. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 03:57:06 PM AEST
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A switch for you I'd say and I love it. Dontchya just love those lil ones???!!!

cool dude

cool dude

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