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Array ( [sid] => 153832 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please, Stay Out Of My Dreams [time] => 2009-10-05 08:20:40 [hometext] => second poem ever. i still love her. [bodytext] => It's bad enough that during the day
I can't get you out of my thoughts,
But now you've broke into all of my dreams,
Controlling the Cast and the Plot.

Well yes, they are perfect.
And yes, they're exquisite.
And of course, they're what I've been craving.
The Cast? Well, they love it.
The Plot? Well, its flawless.
And of course, the critics are raving.

But then I wake up and I get out of bed,
And I realize I've nothing to gain.
Because you don't love me,
And I'm left loving you,
And that's bringing me nothing but pain.

So yes, they are heavenly,
But they're making things harder for me.
So I'm asking, I'm pleading, I'm begging you,
To please, stay out of my dreams. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 60 [informant] => anders [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Please, Stay Out Of My Dreams

Contributed by anders on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 08:20:40 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

It's bad enough that during the day
I can't get you out of my thoughts,
But now you've broke into all of my dreams,
Controlling the Cast and the Plot.

Well yes, they are perfect.
And yes, they're exquisite.
And of course, they're what I've been craving.
The Cast? Well, they love it.
The Plot? Well, its flawless.
And of course, the critics are raving.

But then I wake up and I get out of bed,
And I realize I've nothing to gain.
Because you don't love me,
And I'm left loving you,
And that's bringing me nothing but pain.

So yes, they are heavenly,
But they're making things harder for me.
So I'm asking, I'm pleading, I'm begging you,
To please, stay out of my dreams.

Copyright © anders ... [ 2009-10-05 08:20:40]
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Re: Please, Stay Out Of My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 10:40:36 AM AEST
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Ah, the agony. I've felt precisely the same thing. Unfortunately, you can't control your dreams. (Darn it)

-Phil

Re: Please, Stay Out Of My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 10:47:31 AM AEST
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Dreams can be so wonderful until we wake up,
nice writing
sp

Re: Please, Stay Out Of My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 02:22:13 PM AEST
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Nightly masterpiece!

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