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Love, the Transparency
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 12:50:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yesterday he'd forgotten
My face in the stars
the sun came out to
warm the ice off my bones
the color in my cheeks bled away
when he finally remembered
I had been walking away
The clocks all hang submissively
although I am the one in submission to time
My outwards countenance of strength, defiance
Melts away in your presence
you somehow reduce me to nothing
Possibly because you're all I have to lose
I want smiling faces
and hands touching
So gently and sincere
I could hold your intentions in my heart
My eyes become your muse
My words an inspiration
I, the visionary, am troubled by dreams
the invasion of stress and lack of ambition
not knowing who I am to become
or if it's worth it to know.
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Inevitable
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2009-10-06 12:50:49]
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Re: Love, the Transparency
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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Once again, tragically beautiful. So much emotion, so profoundly expressed.
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