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Array ( [sid] => 154021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => stagnant. . . [time] => 2009-10-12 17:50:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => divide me. . .

& I am more
than mere sorrow
more than
incapable pace

I return. . .

to . . . retreat
into my seperate
selves
& hold vigil
to the doubt, always
slinking, waiting

score me. . .

become tranquil
with all you see
become. . .
blind
(as I am)
to multiplicity

amplify me. . .

so to this world
of silence,
though numb,
I can be free

you never knew me. . . [comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 51 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

stagnant. . .

Contributed by elle on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 05:50:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

divide me. . .

& I am more
than mere sorrow
more than
incapable pace

I return. . .

to . . . retreat
into my seperate
selves
& hold vigil
to the doubt, always
slinking, waiting

score me. . .

become tranquil
with all you see
become. . .
blind
(as I am)
to multiplicity

amplify me. . .

so to this world
of silence,
though numb,
I can be free

you never knew me. . .

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-10-12 17:50:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: stagnant. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 08:09:42 PM AEST
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I love this piece. I love your divisions and the verb/pronoun combination before each stanza. Very creative. Most of all, I love the meaning in this piece.

Heidi

Re: stagnant. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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very creative and unique.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: stagnant. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 11:34:19 PM AEST
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There are those that only seem to take an interest in you...perhaps for some reason unknown to us. But they never really want to get to know you because selfishness over rules any genuine interest.

You rock Elle. Your poetry rocks! This is awesome as usual.

Tim

Re: stagnant. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 07:14:56 AM AEST
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Splendid, fluid, magic.

-Phil

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