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Array ( [sid] => 154252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're Beautiful [time] => 2009-10-19 22:24:02 [hometext] => expressing my thoughts... the end's a bit depressing, but only in one sense. this is sort of directed at one certain person. [bodytext] => Trash talking yourself will not get you far
You look in the mirror and throw the insults at the reflection
Too this, too that; not enough of this, not enough of that
Stop criticizing what is already amazing
What I see is no less than perfection
I know that you see something different, but
Look at yourself through my eyes for once!

I see beauty beyond compare
Long flowing hair, tumbling down your shoulders
Shining brown eyes, curious and passionate in one go
A perfect body, with all the right curves
But your beauty does not stop just there
Your personality is amazing; creative, compassionate
Your brilliance is above all others
And you are absolutely genuine

If I say any of this, you disagree
Say, "You fool, you are blinded by love."
Blinded by love I may be
But that does not mean I cannot recognize true beauty.
I tell you of your beauty, you scoff
You lure me and catch me every day
I'm completely drawn to you; unforgettable is what I'd say
All I can truly say is that you are beautiful.

Are you so desperate for a place among the stars?
I'll give you a place in my heavens any day
You belong among the shining beauties
As you are one yourself
I am in over my head, surrounded by you
You captivate my waking being, and in my dreams as well
I act impetuously to stay with you
Please, please do not leave me for fame.

Fame is what you are worthy of
If you wanted a song, I would write it all
If you wanted the world, I would do my best
To deliver it on a silver platter to your awaiting hands

In short, do not let this worlds concepts of beauty
Blind you in their jaded way
I shall be your eyes in the darkness
As they fail from the awful words of others

You're a beautiful creature
And I see nothing but your everything
I see it all, any flaws you possess
And that has only ever been loving me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Innocent_Sinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You're Beautiful

Contributed by Innocent_Sinner on Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 10:24:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Trash talking yourself will not get you far
You look in the mirror and throw the insults at the reflection
Too this, too that; not enough of this, not enough of that
Stop criticizing what is already amazing
What I see is no less than perfection
I know that you see something different, but
Look at yourself through my eyes for once!

I see beauty beyond compare
Long flowing hair, tumbling down your shoulders
Shining brown eyes, curious and passionate in one go
A perfect body, with all the right curves
But your beauty does not stop just there
Your personality is amazing; creative, compassionate
Your brilliance is above all others
And you are absolutely genuine

If I say any of this, you disagree
Say, "You fool, you are blinded by love."
Blinded by love I may be
But that does not mean I cannot recognize true beauty.
I tell you of your beauty, you scoff
You lure me and catch me every day
I'm completely drawn to you; unforgettable is what I'd say
All I can truly say is that you are beautiful.

Are you so desperate for a place among the stars?
I'll give you a place in my heavens any day
You belong among the shining beauties
As you are one yourself
I am in over my head, surrounded by you
You captivate my waking being, and in my dreams as well
I act impetuously to stay with you
Please, please do not leave me for fame.

Fame is what you are worthy of
If you wanted a song, I would write it all
If you wanted the world, I would do my best
To deliver it on a silver platter to your awaiting hands

In short, do not let this worlds concepts of beauty
Blind you in their jaded way
I shall be your eyes in the darkness
As they fail from the awful words of others

You're a beautiful creature
And I see nothing but your everything
I see it all, any flaws you possess
And that has only ever been loving me.




Copyright © Innocent_Sinner ... [ 2009-10-19 22:24:02]
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Re: You're Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 07:28:18 AM AEST
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I remember in my short lived experience of love, I would always say to her 'you're perfect' and she would always say 'No i'm not!'. Of course, she was to me; and that's all that really matters. Beauty is a social construct, but love isn't.

-Phil


Re: You're Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 06:25:05 AM AEST
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wow... beautiful poem... it relates to me... nice...

-Hopelezz




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