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Crystal creek
Contributed by
shanat
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Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 02:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sun rises in the morning
behind gently rising smoke
dawn breaks
and blended hearts of oak
whimsical air
embraced in the crystal delights of streams
enchanted forest
teaming with life, vines and trees
opal water
golden sand
an aquarium distant land
floating rainbow above the falls
butterfly waits
for a lovers distant calls
emerald moss
ruby leaves
scent of nectar
blown on a sunny breeze
when the sun sets
along crystal creek
moonlight mist
cuddles us to sleep:)
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shanat
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2009-10-23 02:52:55]
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Re: Crystal creek
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, from beginning to end - the flow and the imagery waz jus beautiful. Keep it up:) |
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Re: Crystal creek
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 06:28:23 PM AEST
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I fell in love with not only the poem but the place in which you described so perfectly in this poem.
I want to go there now!
Good work!
Michelle |
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Re: Crystal creek
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 12:15:39 PM AEST
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enchanting and oh sooo beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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