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2008-07-18 22:01:55
Waiting for you

I had never had a vision of my lover,

till one day,

you came to me.

You surprised me,

I felt you were just the right man I was looking for,

so I gave you a smile.

Frankly speaking,

I loved you when I met you the first time.

You couldn't think how glad I was to see you,

in my mind,

I even visualized that I will marry with you.

Looking over the street,

a large crowd there,

you were standing beside me,

like my perfect man,

how hoped I could say you a word.

We were both skirted,

I hoped you could cross my path again.

To my surprise,

you came to me again,

although you were in a silence,

I could hear your heartbeat,

I smiled.

I said I was right here waiting for you,

you said you were standing beside me,

I smiled and said to you,

I was so glad you were here at last,

You laughed and told me,

never mind the causes,

let us take a short walk......

Never before,

walking with a stranger shoulder to shoulder.

That day,

it all happened in a split second,

I was very close to you a stranger walking and talking,

it seemed everything you talking about with me was very interesting.

As if in a sweet dream,

I was enjoying in it.

between the sky and earth,

as if only a line.

When I was trying to hold your hand,

I heard my breath was fast and hard.

Yes,

at that moment,

I could almost see our future.

I felt very warm staying with you,

I wanted to say all our past days for you.

When I saw you smiling at me,

my muscles relaxed,

so I didn't bother to say anything any more,

for you took me by hand and told me there was coming a car......

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Waiting for you

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 06:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Waiting for you
2008-07-18 22:01:55
Waiting for you

I had never had a vision of my lover,

till one day,

you came to me.

You surprised me,

I felt you were just the right man I was looking for,

so I gave you a smile.

Frankly speaking,

I loved you when I met you the first time.

You couldn't think how glad I was to see you,

in my mind,

I even visualized that I will marry with you.

Looking over the street,

a large crowd there,

you were standing beside me,

like my perfect man,

how hoped I could say you a word.

We were both skirted,

I hoped you could cross my path again.

To my surprise,

you came to me again,

although you were in a silence,

I could hear your heartbeat,

I smiled.

I said I was right here waiting for you,

you said you were standing beside me,

I smiled and said to you,

I was so glad you were here at last,

You laughed and told me,

never mind the causes,

let us take a short walk......

Never before,

walking with a stranger shoulder to shoulder.

That day,

it all happened in a split second,

I was very close to you a stranger walking and talking,

it seemed everything you talking about with me was very interesting.

As if in a sweet dream,

I was enjoying in it.

between the sky and earth,

as if only a line.

When I was trying to hold your hand,

I heard my breath was fast and hard.

Yes,

at that moment,

I could almost see our future.

I felt very warm staying with you,

I wanted to say all our past days for you.

When I saw you smiling at me,

my muscles relaxed,

so I didn't bother to say anything any more,

for you took me by hand and told me there was coming a car......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-24 06:33:20]
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Re: Waiting for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 09:20:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem!!! Good Work.
Alexa.

Re: Waiting for you (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 09:31:22 AM AEST
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beautifully written..simple yet effective

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