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Array ( [sid] => 154406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The First Feeling [time] => 2009-10-24 20:39:52 [hometext] => Sorry if its not good. This is the First poem I ever have written. [bodytext] => Time passes fast
You get caught up
But I never thought something like this
Would cause such a rut

Everything was perfect
It was just me and you
All of the sudden one day
Everyone knew

Days were longer
Weeks seemed like years
I saw you less and less everyday
Only praying you were here

You’d come at lunch
I’d stop and stare
Looking back on those nights
Then I glanced again and you’re not there

The best moments of my life
It all became clear
My chances of looking into your eyes
Would soon disappear

I cry so much
Its seems unreal
Giving you everything I had
Everything I feel

I promised I’d never forget
I dreamed for this endeavor
Waiting for you on the roof
Knowing I’ll wait for you forever
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 24 [informant] => kiscool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

The First Feeling

Contributed by kiscool on Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 08:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Time passes fast
You get caught up
But I never thought something like this
Would cause such a rut

Everything was perfect
It was just me and you
All of the sudden one day
Everyone knew

Days were longer
Weeks seemed like years
I saw you less and less everyday
Only praying you were here

You’d come at lunch
I’d stop and stare
Looking back on those nights
Then I glanced again and you’re not there

The best moments of my life
It all became clear
My chances of looking into your eyes
Would soon disappear

I cry so much
Its seems unreal
Giving you everything I had
Everything I feel

I promised I’d never forget
I dreamed for this endeavor
Waiting for you on the roof
Knowing I’ll wait for you forever

Copyright Â© kiscool ... [ 2009-10-24 20:39:52]
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Re: The First Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th October 2009 @ 09:25:12 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
It's obvious that you have a natural knack for writing poetry.
good work.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: The First Feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 04:15:16 PM AEST
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yes very nice write, I felt it for sure, keep writing more
sp

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