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Array ( [sid] => 154425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The night is too dark [time] => 2009-10-25 19:35:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night is too dark
2008-07-19 14:54:53
The night is too dark

Say good bye to grey day,

I am surrounded by night,

the world is dark enough,

it is just what you want.

People are just like the ghosts under the neon light,

the city has its faint beauty,

if someone feels it is decadent,

I will tell you that is because it is too tired.

Yes,

it is too tired,

if someone breaks his glass of wine,

it won't take notice,

for the night is too dark,

it can't see the tears from someone's eyes.

Oh, yes,

the night is too dark,

it never gives anyone warm comfort.

Oh, yes,

the night is too drak,

who cares if an awaking person from wine will look more haggard?

the alcohol seems to have fried everything up,

who cares who will have nothing to regret or not?

Please don't refer to these past things again,

life is just stormy,

what matters if we can't go away from the memories,

what matters if our love and hate still leaves our heart.

Let yesterday go,

for a better tomorrow.

I don't want to ask your news,

oh, about love,

this one is a real teaser,

it is fantastic.

I can try to forget all the pain,

but it is not easy to forget you,

yes, no joke.

I am not alone,

you are still in my heart,

I love you so much,

I am helpless to stop loving you,

for you are always my dream,

for I feel you are still in my room.

The night is too dark,

I am so easy to be touched by our memories,

my heart is aching for you,

I am tasting our past heartthrobs,

I want to ask you when we will meet again,

I don't think if it is asked from my mind.

I know,

there will be no difference after you leave me,

for life acts a little too quickly.

But I am afraid of my tears,

it will be like the dark night,

for it will cloud my eyes.

If,

if you will feel better after forgetting me

it is no use explaining the reason to you,

well,

let all our stories be blown away by wind,

or remain in the dark night......

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The night is too dark

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 07:35:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The night is too dark
2008-07-19 14:54:53
The night is too dark

Say good bye to grey day,

I am surrounded by night,

the world is dark enough,

it is just what you want.

People are just like the ghosts under the neon light,

the city has its faint beauty,

if someone feels it is decadent,

I will tell you that is because it is too tired.

Yes,

it is too tired,

if someone breaks his glass of wine,

it won't take notice,

for the night is too dark,

it can't see the tears from someone's eyes.

Oh, yes,

the night is too dark,

it never gives anyone warm comfort.

Oh, yes,

the night is too drak,

who cares if an awaking person from wine will look more haggard?

the alcohol seems to have fried everything up,

who cares who will have nothing to regret or not?

Please don't refer to these past things again,

life is just stormy,

what matters if we can't go away from the memories,

what matters if our love and hate still leaves our heart.

Let yesterday go,

for a better tomorrow.

I don't want to ask your news,

oh, about love,

this one is a real teaser,

it is fantastic.

I can try to forget all the pain,

but it is not easy to forget you,

yes, no joke.

I am not alone,

you are still in my heart,

I love you so much,

I am helpless to stop loving you,

for you are always my dream,

for I feel you are still in my room.

The night is too dark,

I am so easy to be touched by our memories,

my heart is aching for you,

I am tasting our past heartthrobs,

I want to ask you when we will meet again,

I don't think if it is asked from my mind.

I know,

there will be no difference after you leave me,

for life acts a little too quickly.

But I am afraid of my tears,

it will be like the dark night,

for it will cloud my eyes.

If,

if you will feel better after forgetting me

it is no use explaining the reason to you,

well,

let all our stories be blown away by wind,

or remain in the dark night......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-25 19:35:50]
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Re: The night is too dark (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 07:51:49 PM AEST
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Holy,
layer by layer I feel this poem.
Beautiful in its sadness.
The night can offer up so many different emotions.
Most times I love the night, but then there are those moments, I so feel this!

Hugs you tight
Michelle

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