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Array ( [sid] => 154446 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Of An Inner Child [time] => 2009-10-26 19:12:31 [hometext] => Dedicated To The Victims of Child Molestation [bodytext] => Don't mourn for the shadow
Sitting in the dark.
It's intangiblity
so far reaching.
Meanin nothing to noone pleading for light.
A black rose dying a heart gone cold.
Your tears are pointless
Compared to tears I've shed
Don't cry for me for i'm already dead.
I sit back and wither.
This bottle my knife.
Falling further from a once meaningful ledge.
Don't bleed for me
cause i've already bled.
Alone in the world
Not alone in my bed
Now a plague on this corpse My inner child now dead [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 39 [informant] => krystal33204 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Death Of An Inner Child

Contributed by krystal33204 on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 07:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Don't mourn for the shadow
Sitting in the dark.
It's intangiblity
so far reaching.
Meanin nothing to noone pleading for light.
A black rose dying a heart gone cold.
Your tears are pointless
Compared to tears I've shed
Don't cry for me for i'm already dead.
I sit back and wither.
This bottle my knife.
Falling further from a once meaningful ledge.
Don't bleed for me
cause i've already bled.
Alone in the world
Not alone in my bed
Now a plague on this corpse My inner child now dead

Copyright Â© krystal33204 ... [ 2009-10-26 19:12:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death Of An Inner Child (User Rating: 1 )
by psychodavis on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 07:45:15 PM AEST
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wow, great poem, sad reaches down and grabs your soul

Re: Death Of An Inner Child (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 09:08:45 PM AEST
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I can tottaly relate to this. No one can never understand unless they've been there.
I've often wondered what it would have been like to give my self to the one?? freely and by choice.
This is an awesome write and fits the situation to the t.
Bless you for having the courage to write this.
huggs, blessings, healing,
emy

Re: Death Of An Inner Child (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 02:05:05 AM AEST
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Hi,

Tragic ...... yet stunning in its tragedy.
Child abuse is the scourge of innocence.
Save them! Save them!

Oh, that I had a magic wand ... an all-seeing eye!

Tommy

Re: Death Of An Inner Child (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 09:45:54 AM AEST
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this kind of pain lasts a lifetime and permeates every relationship you have ....even the one you have with yourself...of this I know....you touched a soul today.....

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