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But I've never had a reason to complain
You made me smile when I was crying
And you took away my pain
You were everything I ever wanted
And everything I could ever need
I'd trust in you no matter what happened
I'd follow you wherever you'd lead
You'd kiss me like I meant everything
You'd hold me like you'd never see me again
I absolutely love everything about you
And on you, I'd fully depend
You'd do all the special little things
That made me feel so alive
Write me poems, show up with roses
When I'm with you, I would thrive
I'll never forget that cold autumn
When you proposed with your ring
You knew I was too young; it was a promise
We'd be together again next spring
So here I am, at this park
Where I sit every day of spring
Waiting for you to come and hold me
And on my wrist, my tears sting.

I love everything about you
You were everything I wanted to be
This world tore you away; I'm dying
Because you were the other part of me.

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Everything About You

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 02:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Most couples have some sort of problem
But I've never had a reason to complain
You made me smile when I was crying
And you took away my pain
You were everything I ever wanted
And everything I could ever need
I'd trust in you no matter what happened
I'd follow you wherever you'd lead
You'd kiss me like I meant everything
You'd hold me like you'd never see me again
I absolutely love everything about you
And on you, I'd fully depend
You'd do all the special little things
That made me feel so alive
Write me poems, show up with roses
When I'm with you, I would thrive
I'll never forget that cold autumn
When you proposed with your ring
You knew I was too young; it was a promise
We'd be together again next spring
So here I am, at this park
Where I sit every day of spring
Waiting for you to come and hold me
And on my wrist, my tears sting.

I love everything about you
You were everything I wanted to be
This world tore you away; I'm dying
Because you were the other part of me.





Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-10-30 14:50:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by hopelezz on Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 04:39:03 AM AEST
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amazing love poem... it relates to me... nice....

-hopelezz


Re: Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:28:11 PM AEST
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beautifully written i feel your pain.....

Puppy :)


Re: Everything About You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:50:43 AM AEST
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The flow of this piece was excellent, it was so easy to read. It also contained profound emotions, which emanated from the page. Superb work!

-Phil




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