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Array ( [sid] => 154644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2009-11-02 04:50:27 [hometext] => A girl leaving her boyfriend [bodytext] => I remember the words that you've said
its running around here in my head
Is this just a dream that I am in
my heart is starting to bleed within

When I saw you walk out that door
I felt something I've never felt before
Is this true what im feeling inside
It truely feels like I've just died

When I watched you walk away
It was raining just like yesterday
I told you I don't want you to go
You then turned to me very slow

You said to me that you have to go
Please could you stay till tomorrow
As The rain fell from your cheek
I started to feel very weak

I will never forget what you gave me
The best things in life that are free
With your beautiful voice you said goodbye
I let go of your hand and began to cry

Now its just me and this cold breeze
I am sitting down here on my knees
I have never felt this kind of pain
watching you drive away in the rain [comments] => 1 [counter] => 137 [topic] => 2 [informant] => armysarge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Goodbye

Contributed by armysarge on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 04:50:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I remember the words that you've said
its running around here in my head
Is this just a dream that I am in
my heart is starting to bleed within

When I saw you walk out that door
I felt something I've never felt before
Is this true what im feeling inside
It truely feels like I've just died

When I watched you walk away
It was raining just like yesterday
I told you I don't want you to go
You then turned to me very slow

You said to me that you have to go
Please could you stay till tomorrow
As The rain fell from your cheek
I started to feel very weak

I will never forget what you gave me
The best things in life that are free
With your beautiful voice you said goodbye
I let go of your hand and began to cry

Now its just me and this cold breeze
I am sitting down here on my knees
I have never felt this kind of pain
watching you drive away in the rain

Copyright © armysarge ... [ 2009-11-02 04:50:27]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by jennguy41 on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 10:53:57 AM AEST
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I know the exact pain you are going thru and I know it hurts. People say it will go away in time, no, it don't go away it just gets where it doesn't hurt as much. Good Luck in life.

Jenn

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