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Array ( [sid] => 154650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unforgettable [time] => 2009-11-02 12:37:58 [hometext] => "As an old man goes gently into the night, he reminisces on a beautiful memory of his first dance with his wife" [bodytext] => A gallant romance
The placid moments of tenderness
Immune to the pearls of winter
A safe haven for love to rest.

A goddess fabricated within sight
Kept by gorgeous gaiety attire,
The colors of love surrounded
Slaking the longing of an endless desire.

Solitude vanished in the skyline
The peaceful beauty of a desert storm,
A presence warmed with a celestial charm
An angel materialized and took form.

The sweetest metaphors invited
Then a dull spectrum took new shine,
A few beats took panic,
But a smile blossomed from a joyous find.

Love pulsated through every fiber,
A love which two hearts knew was in-effort able,
An intimate slow dance transcended
Like magic…. It was truly unforgettable.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 335 [topic] => 2 [informant] => daylynn_van_wyk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Unforgettable

Contributed by daylynn_van_wyk on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 12:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A gallant romance
The placid moments of tenderness
Immune to the pearls of winter
A safe haven for love to rest.

A goddess fabricated within sight
Kept by gorgeous gaiety attire,
The colors of love surrounded
Slaking the longing of an endless desire.

Solitude vanished in the skyline
The peaceful beauty of a desert storm,
A presence warmed with a celestial charm
An angel materialized and took form.

The sweetest metaphors invited
Then a dull spectrum took new shine,
A few beats took panic,
But a smile blossomed from a joyous find.

Love pulsated through every fiber,
A love which two hearts knew was in-effort able,
An intimate slow dance transcended
Like magic…. It was truly unforgettable.

Copyright © daylynn_van_wyk ... [ 2009-11-02 12:37:58]
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Re: Unforgettable (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 02:23:13 PM AEST
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Yip! This old man remembers a few magic moments
like this.

Thanks for the memories!

Tommy

Re: Unforgettable (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:25:50 PM AEST
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This is such a delightful poem it almost made me cry from the sheer beauty and joy found floating in each line. Thanks for sharing!

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Unforgettable (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:36:36 PM AEST
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Thanx:)

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