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grant me remedy. . .
without exception
without compromise
but not without withdrawal
from the pain inspired of life
distilled
into pools of moonglow
reflected
fragments of misconception

grant me notice. . .
the collage of struggle
beyond staggered window panes
transformed into stained-glass vis-a'-vis
as vapors unto vapors

& voice. . .
puffy pink clouds, wisping
that assume the shape of lips
antidoting lies
multiplied by truths
that disengage forever. . .

lift me higher
subdued with fragrant anticipation
eyelids trembling, fibers pulsing
every known particle wavering
into the organs
that co-exist with the sublime

morphemic distraction

enter the muse
whose eyes compile infinity
into an iris of cerulean & indigo base
bestowing
stroke & flow
stone & grind
plume & glistening doubt
sprinkled
upon the wind
resembling wing. . .
so that I may find my way [comments] => 7 [counter] => 349 [topic] => 69 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => poets )

peace as muse

Contributed by elle on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 05:35:12 PM in AEST
Topic: poets

grant me remedy. . .
without exception
without compromise
but not without withdrawal
from the pain inspired of life
distilled
into pools of moonglow
reflected
fragments of misconception

grant me notice. . .
the collage of struggle
beyond staggered window panes
transformed into stained-glass vis-a'-vis
as vapors unto vapors

& voice. . .
puffy pink clouds, wisping
that assume the shape of lips
antidoting lies
multiplied by truths
that disengage forever. . .

lift me higher
subdued with fragrant anticipation
eyelids trembling, fibers pulsing
every known particle wavering
into the organs
that co-exist with the sublime

morphemic distraction

enter the muse
whose eyes compile infinity
into an iris of cerulean & indigo base
bestowing
stroke & flow
stone & grind
plume & glistening doubt
sprinkled
upon the wind
resembling wing. . .
so that I may find my way

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-11-02 17:35:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:49:03 PM AEST
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Elle,
I am always drawn to each beautiful word in your poetry.

Beautiful work sweety!

Hugs
Michelle

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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Oh my Goddess Elle! Amazing! If I had to choose a favorite/best of yours this would be the ONE! But don't make me....;)

love,
ming

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 12:28:41 AM AEST
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Goodness gracious; an exquisite masterpiece that actually had me saying words that I cannot type here. ... enter the muse is an understatement compared to what you can do with words!!!!

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 01:38:49 AM AEST
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Hi Elle,

Excellent! Music in words!

Tommy

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 02:41:17 AM AEST
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Wow! That was macnificent, i doubt i'd find the words to discribe how much i enjoyed it, but know this is a truly a beautiful poem, thanx 4 sharing:) day-day

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 12:40:44 PM AEST
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Remarkable that is you =)

Re: peace as muse (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 01:34:15 PM AEST
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This piece indeed breathed beauty
I was completely in the words
from beginning to end

Smiles
Kara

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