|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Drift
Contributed by
spike
on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:19:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Along the paths of dreaming
the black crows are screaming,
cawing for the pieces
of the memories that are me.
But I hold em like my treasures,
the pain and all the pleasures;
a scarecrow for the moments
that huddle close to home.
The Dark Man is stalking me,
grinning as hes walking, see
counting all my spent days
against them that remain.
But I brush aside his follow
cause I know his heart is hollow,
while mine is overflowing
with love and life and song.
The back roads of wandering,
dead quiet in my rambling
can be treacherous and wanton,
but I love to take the chance.
On the horizon, distant vagaries
friends, or maybe enemies;
yet only the joining path
will let all be revealed.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2009-11-03 04:19:44]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Drift
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 04:49:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| A poem on a few levels, my favourite kind of writing!Great imagery, open to interpretation and an announcement of life in the line,"while mine is overflowing with love and life and song." I thoroughly enjoyed this. |
|
|
Re: Drift
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 05:16:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi,
This is quite simply one of the best poems that
I've read on this site ..... or any site, for that
matter.
This would grace the pages of poetry written
by the eternal bards!
Terrific!
Tommy
|
|
|
Re: Drift
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 09:58:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Love this. It makes me very happy to see poetry unlike my own that says so much so eloquently!
ming |
|
|
Re: Drift
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 01:16:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| :) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
