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Array ( [sid] => 154742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wont Let Go [time] => 2009-11-04 20:29:07 [hometext] => .......idk i got bored one night.... [bodytext] => We used to laugh,
We used to cry,
We never had a reason to lie,
I made you laugh,
You made cry but always
Came to dry the tears I cried,
I learned from you,
You learned from me,
But then you left without a word,
You went away and all you said was,
I’m leaving because I love you,
I held you close without a word,
Then you left me in the dark,
And left your mark as an empty space in my heart,
I’ll never forget I’ll never let go [comments] => 5 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 48 [informant] => musicrox13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Wont Let Go

Contributed by musicrox13 on Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 08:29:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We used to laugh,
We used to cry,
We never had a reason to lie,
I made you laugh,
You made cry but always
Came to dry the tears I cried,
I learned from you,
You learned from me,
But then you left without a word,
You went away and all you said was,
I’m leaving because I love you,
I held you close without a word,
Then you left me in the dark,
And left your mark as an empty space in my heart,
I’ll never forget I’ll never let go

Copyright Â© musicrox13 ... [ 2009-11-04 20:29:07]
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Re: I Wont Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 01:49:05 AM AEST
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Who ever rated this a two, and wouldn't say why, is a coward. I enjoyed the read, I felt the words. There were a couple of type-os but a great poem. thank you for sharing.

The Phantom

Re: I Wont Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 05:08:00 AM AEST
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I agree with the Phantom I loved this poem showed deap feeling, I can relate to this,
keep sharing your writing
sp

Re: I Wont Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 02:05:34 PM AEST
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it's one of those 'boring' nights that makes u contemplate and realize something is stirring up inside. (but of course don't write a poem about those truly boring nights haha). Some emotion just creeps up and u find yourself writing about it. whether your poem recalls a true account or not, it was still a well written piece.

take care

-K.Z.

Re: I Wont Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 10:43:26 AM AEST
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This comment is not personal but to the people who cannot beleive someone gave this poem a low rating. This is just a monologue that lacks any creativity, talent or innovation. Comments such as the ones left are as i see it the main reason why this site has been clogged up with high school writing. I would like to leave comments on people's work but find very little to say that is positive and so usually i refrain from doing so.

Re: I Wont Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:42:58 PM AEST
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Myself i think this is well written
Take care
Fuzzy

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