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Array ( [sid] => 154929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I knew from the start [time] => 2009-11-11 11:30:03 [hometext] => A short story of love at first sight [bodytext] => I didnt want to meet you from the start
I guess I knew youd take my heart, with a casual hello,
we locked eyes, then I knew, I had to go,
run home as fast as I could, before you took a second look,
before I could leave you came over asked
my name,
IM with my friends and I have go, yes I let them take the blame ya know,
before I could leave you asked me please, would I come back,
I said yes but I knew I couldnt, I ran home to hide from you.
Laid my head to rest, trying to keep your face from my sight,
the very next night, a knock came on my door sister answered;
oh come right on in. You have company look whos here,
there was that face I tried to esrase the night before.
first thing you asked why didnt you come back I waited for you.
can you come out just for a bit, I bit my lip
because my sister had already gotten my coat,
you go now and have a little fun, and fun we had we laughed,
I hadnt enjoyed myself in so long,
All along I knew it from the start,
this was the begining of my next broken heart.
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I knew from the start

Contributed by longhaircg on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 11:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I didnt want to meet you from the start
I guess I knew youd take my heart, with a casual hello,
we locked eyes, then I knew, I had to go,
run home as fast as I could, before you took a second look,
before I could leave you came over asked
my name,
IM with my friends and I have go, yes I let them take the blame ya know,
before I could leave you asked me please, would I come back,
I said yes but I knew I couldnt, I ran home to hide from you.
Laid my head to rest, trying to keep your face from my sight,
the very next night, a knock came on my door sister answered;
oh come right on in. You have company look whos here,
there was that face I tried to esrase the night before.
first thing you asked why didnt you come back I waited for you.
can you come out just for a bit, I bit my lip
because my sister had already gotten my coat,
you go now and have a little fun, and fun we had we laughed,
I hadnt enjoyed myself in so long,
All along I knew it from the start,
this was the begining of my next broken heart.




Copyright © longhaircg ... [ 2009-11-11 11:30:03]
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Re: I knew from the start (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 05:28:34 PM AEST
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I know that sense of impending disaster when it comes to relationships.

Sometimes we just can't stop ourselves. Sometimes we just have to take the fall.

Nice write.


Re: I knew from the start (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 12:44:36 PM AEST
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Oh yes, this rings very true!
and it doesn't matter whether you say yes or no, you still end up walking the
path of doomed love, at least once!
Smashing write x
Star x x x




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