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Array ( [sid] => 154930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what is a friend? [time] => 2009-11-11 11:40:40 [hometext] => spectrum. . . expanded [bodytext] =>

what is a friend?

my thoughts. . .

it is one with

whom you dare to be

yourself.

your soul, naked before him

he seems to ask of you
to put on nothing,

only to be what you are.

he does not want you

to be better or worse.

when you are together

you feel as a prisoner

who has been declared innocent

. . . set free. . .

you don't have to be on your guard.

you can say what you think or feel
so long as it is genuinely you.

he understands

those contradictions

in your nature

that lead others to misjudge you.

with him, you breath freely.

you can avow your little vanities

& envies

& vicious sparks

your meanness & absurdities

& in opening them up to him
they are lost

dissolved. . . into the white ocean

of his loyalty

you do not have to be careful.

neglect him. . . tolerate him. . .

best of all, to be still with him

it matters not

he likes you -

he is like fire

purges to the bone

he understands. . .
understanding

you can weep with him

sin with him

laugh with him

pray with him

through it all

& underneath he sees. . .

knows. . . loves you

a friend. . .

what is a friend?

one
just one, I repeat

with whom you dare to be

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what is a friend?

Contributed by elle on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 11:40:40 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry





what is a friend?

my thoughts. . .

it is one with

whom you dare to be

yourself.

your soul, naked before him

he seems to ask of you
to put on nothing,

only to be what you are.

he does not want you

to be better or worse.

when you are together

you feel as a prisoner

who has been declared innocent

. . . set free. . .

you don't have to be on your guard.

you can say what you think or feel
so long as it is genuinely you.

he understands

those contradictions

in your nature

that lead others to misjudge you.

with him, you breath freely.

you can avow your little vanities

& envies

& vicious sparks

your meanness & absurdities

& in opening them up to him
they are lost

dissolved. . . into the white ocean

of his loyalty

you do not have to be careful.

neglect him. . . tolerate him. . .

best of all, to be still with him

it matters not

he likes you -

he is like fire

purges to the bone

he understands. . .
understanding

you can weep with him

sin with him

laugh with him

pray with him

through it all

& underneath he sees. . .

knows. . . loves you

a friend. . .

what is a friend?

one
just one, I repeat

with whom you dare to be

yourself




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Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 12:09:09 PM AEST
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I've been thinking about this just recently and you are absolutely spot on. Well written and a great conclusion.


Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 05:46:07 PM AEST
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Well said, Elle.... I dare say, I have a few great friends....

Jenni


Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th November 2009 @ 08:28:49 AM AEST
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CLAPS LOUDLY!!

Well said, well said!!!!


Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 04:40:58 PM AEST
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"You Nailed It" (and then some!)


"he understands

those contradictions

in your nature."


LOVE that part.
A True Friend Indeed !


Peace&Love&Always
My Friend


Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 05:24:59 AM AEST
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absolutely, true indeed, yum is all I can express, you got it.
sp


Re: what is a friend? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 09:16:38 PM AEST
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**** applauds ****



There are so many that need to heed your freaking great way of saying things...saying this!!!
cool dude




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