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I said Id never play that game
I said Id always be true to me
Well what I said and did just arent the same

My lips tell me that its worth it
My head concludes that I should try
My body agrees wholeheartedly
But my heart questions me about this guy

What makes him so special
Why is he the one
What makes you think it will be different
From your other nights of fun

Nights where you were so sure
That hed fall in love with you
Nights that ended in tears
Because there was nothing else you could do

But once again
My body shuts out my heart
This one will be different it says
This is only the start

And at the end of the day
My heart says I told you so
This guy was just like the others
Leaving you drowning in sorrow and woe [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ell_03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Said...

Contributed by ell_03 on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 12:04:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I said Id never change myself
I said Id never play that game
I said Id always be true to me
Well what I said and did just arent the same

My lips tell me that its worth it
My head concludes that I should try
My body agrees wholeheartedly
But my heart questions me about this guy

What makes him so special
Why is he the one
What makes you think it will be different
From your other nights of fun

Nights where you were so sure
That hed fall in love with you
Nights that ended in tears
Because there was nothing else you could do

But once again
My body shuts out my heart
This one will be different it says
This is only the start

And at the end of the day
My heart says I told you so
This guy was just like the others
Leaving you drowning in sorrow and woe

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2009-11-14 00:04:01]
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Re: I Said... (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 11:44:11 AM AEST
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Oh Eli, the times I have cried over the same thing is too embarassing to say!
I love the way you write so clearly, I admire you for that, and will look out for you in the future.
Many wishes sent your way x x x

Re: I Said... (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 11:48:03 AM AEST
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Oh no, i'm so sorry Ell, I called you Eli,
I do apologise x x x

Re: I Said... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 14th November 2009 @ 11:59:20 AM AEST
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This is very good, wish you well
Take care

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