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Array ( [sid] => 155055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paradigm dreams [time] => 2009-11-15 23:21:49 [hometext] => This is a little more descriptive than I normally write, hopefully you get tha analogies [bodytext] => Devouring, I feast
Tasting the flavor of the paradigm,
Time and time again.
Towering ,
I stand on this man-made bureaucracy,
Dreaming of simplicity,
My future black, a color of obscurity
Salivating, over what used to be.
I dance,
with wolves and eat with the lions.
These ruins we roam,
Gardens disguised by deceived convictions.
A blade of grass cannot grow,
Without a desire to know.
Reverse this river of blindness,
Divert this hunger of madness.
Unhappiness sours my soul,
Every day I slither this road of endless soles.
A faded past,
when I mingled among the sheep,
But this jungle binds one,
in crazed paradoxical sleep.
Searching for that greener paradise,
Scouring, the Satisfaction disappears, I agonize .
Lost in this Michael Angelo portrait,
Pressed beliefs surrounded by Holy writ.
I run until limbs exhausted,
Paralyzed,
I stare at a horizon that is frosted……..
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Paradigm dreams

Contributed by recyclebin on Sunday, 15th November 2009 @ 11:21:49 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Devouring, I feast
Tasting the flavor of the paradigm,
Time and time again.
Towering ,
I stand on this man-made bureaucracy,
Dreaming of simplicity,
My future black, a color of obscurity
Salivating, over what used to be.
I dance,
with wolves and eat with the lions.
These ruins we roam,
Gardens disguised by deceived convictions.
A blade of grass cannot grow,
Without a desire to know.
Reverse this river of blindness,
Divert this hunger of madness.
Unhappiness sours my soul,
Every day I slither this road of endless soles.
A faded past,
when I mingled among the sheep,
But this jungle binds one,
in crazed paradoxical sleep.
Searching for that greener paradise,
Scouring, the Satisfaction disappears, I agonize .
Lost in this Michael Angelo portrait,
Pressed beliefs surrounded by Holy writ.
I run until limbs exhausted,
Paralyzed,
I stare at a horizon that is frosted……..

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Re: Paradigm dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 01:09:25 PM AEST
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Bin~

Wow....my mind went everywhere with this
This is definitely among my favorites

Hugs and smiles always
Kara

Re: Paradigm dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 09:18:25 PM AEST
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Holy censored. This is freaking fantastic. Brilliant, my friend, absolutely brilliant!!!!!

Tim

Re: Paradigm dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 01:38:00 AM AEST
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Well bin, my friend, I certainly wouldn't argue with you on these facts. smile
Fantabulus work.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Paradigm dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 07:37:25 AM AEST
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I'm totally speechless!
I only hope that one day I will
be able to write something as
amazing as this!
Thankyou for your inspiration...
Star x x x

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