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Drowning
Contributed by
andrewhs
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Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 02:46:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im drowning
Drowning in a sea of fear
Im calling
But nobody wants to hear
Im breaking
Into so many thousands of pieces
Im going down
With the weight of the worry
I want to talk
But everyone has their own agenda
Keep him in the dark they think
Im working so hard
To try and raise a smile
But your images haunt me
They hunt me down and say look at me
Look at me damn you, Is this what you want?
Is this who you love?
Im bailing a boat
With a large gaping hole
That may be beyond repair
I hate this town and everyone in it
I hate this house and the lies within it
I want my life back
I want my wife back
Perhaps Im just treading water in a sea way too vast
Can I last? Or will I go under?
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2009-11-16 02:46:23]
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Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 16th November 2009 @ 06:40:26 AM AEST
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Wow Andrew!
Yet again you have blown me away
with your great writing!
I can almost feel your heart bursting in
my hands reading this. So emotionally
rich. Let it all out!
Luv Last Star x x x |
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